onsdag den 27. august 2014

Sådan fortsætter begyndelsen IKKE

Blue Velvet, som skrevet står i manuskriptet på Lynchs hjemmeside.

Dette er begyndelsen, som den er:



- dette er fortsættelsen til begyndelsen, som den (desværre) ikke blev - så mærkeligt at LÆSE scener I ens yndlingsfilm (flertal), som på den måde er dobbelt fiktive:

10. EXT. BEAUMONTS' FRONT LAWN - DAY

Water is still spraying out over the driveway and onto the car and into 
the yard beyond.

A small boy, GREGG, appears wearing only white underpants and a white 
t-shirt.  He holds a large red popsicle.

Gregg waddles around looking at the crazy water show.  He holds his hand 
out to get it wet in the spray.  This makes him screw up his face in a 
laugh.

He waddles over and looks at Mr. Beaumont on the ground.

Mr. Beaumont seems to be worse now, unconscious, but still gripping the 
hose tightly. His clothes are sopping wet.

11. EXT. GREGG'S HOUSE - DAY

Screen window of Gregg's house. Gregg's mother calls out but remains 
looking at a bowl she is holding in her hands.

     GREGG'S MOTHER
     (calling out)
Gregg. Billy's waiting for his teddy.

She then turns to look out.

     GREGG'S MOTHER
      (continuing)
GREGG! Billy's waiting for his teddy, honey.

         CUT TO:

12. EXT. BEAUMONTS' FRONT LAWN - DAY

GREGG'S MOTHER P.O.V. THROUGH SCREEN WINDOW

IN THE DISTANCE, she sees Gregg's back, a bush, some legs with wet khaki 
trousers and water squirting up in the air.

         GREGG'S MOTHER (V.O.)
   TOM!!!

         CUT TO:

13. EXT. COLLEGE CAMPUS BUILDING - NIGHT

TRAVELING along sidewalk, bushes, to lighted windows of an auditorium. 
MUSIC is heard.

14. INT. COLLEGE AUDITORIUM - NIGHT

A dance is going on.  Sixties MUSIC plays, performed by a live band on 
stage.  College kids dance.

A COLLEGE BOY enters the auditorium, urgently looking for someone.  He 
quickly approaches a GIRL.

     COLLEGE BOY
   Louise? Where's Jeffrey? His mother's on
   the phone - it's an emergency.

       LOUISE
   He disappeared to the men's room a little
   while ago. I'm getting very tired of 
   waiting - let's go find him.

15. INT. JANITOR'S QUARTERS - COLLEGE - NIGHT

We MOVE INTO the face of JEFFREY. He is hiding behind a furnace.  He is 
fascinated by a sight beyond in the darkness of this basement room.

He sees a male student trying to rape his girlfriend.  She is crying and 
telling him to stop but the boy keeps forcing her down toward the ground. 
forcing her clothes off her.  Jeffrey at this point hears his name being 
called.  Each time he hears his name the caller is closer.  The boy is now
hurting the girl.  Before Jeffrey leaves the furnace room he yells out:

      JEFFREY
   Hey, shit head. Leave her alone. Don't 
   force girls!

The couple looks up but cannot see Jeffrey.  The boy is scared and releases
the girl who promptly pulls farther away, crying.

Jeffrey leaves the furnace room.

16. INT. HALLWAY - COLLEGE - NIGHT

Louise and the college student see him and move quickly toward him.

         COLLEGE BOY
   Jeffrey, your mother's on the phone. It's
   an emergency.

       LOUISE
   Thanks for keeping me waiting so long.

As Jeffrey moves quickly toward the telephone.

       JEFFREY
I'm sorry, Louise.

17. INT. PHONE/HALLWAY - COLLEGE - NIGHT

The phone dangles on its cord in the foreground as Jeffrey moves toward 
it in the background.  Louise slowly follows Jeffrey, but stays in back 
of him.  Jeffrey picks up the phone.

      JEFFREY
   Hello. Mom? What's wrong with Dad?. 
   What's happening?. Come home? Sure I will.

18. INT. BEAUMONT'S BEDROOM - NIGHT

Mrs. Beaumont sits talking on the phone in a dark quiet bedroom.

        MRS. BEAUMONT
   I mean, for good, Jeffrey.

         CUT TO:

19. INT. PHONE/HALLWAY - COLLEGE - NIGHT

CLOSEUP - JEFFREY

      JEFFREY
   For good?. I can't. Mom. Not right in
   the middle of the term.

         CUT TO:

20. INT. BEAUMONT'S BEDROOM - NIGHT

        MRS. BEAUMONT
        (now looks very tired and 
         poor health)
   Jeffrey. honey. Your father's condition
   is serious. It's going to cost so much.
   We just won't have the money to keep you
   in school. I'm telling you this now, so 
   that you can get your things together and 
   check out of school, honey, or whatever you 
   have to do. it'll save you another trip back.
   You're going to have to work at the store.

 
         CUT TO:

21. INT. PHONE/HALLWAY - COLLEGE - NIGHT

CLOSEUP - JEFFREY

      JEFFREY
           (crying)
Mom.

Louise looks at Jeffrey crying, then turns away.  Jeffrey hangs up the 
phone.

         CUT TO:

22. INT. BEAUMONT'S BEDROOM - NIGHT

Mrs. Beaumont hangs up her phone. just next to the phone traveling into 
a shadow is a winged termite.

FADE TO:

23. INT. GIRLS DORM LOBBY - COLLEGE - NIGHT

Jeffrey is waiting in a girls dorm lobby for Louise. 

Girls are milling around.  Louise gets off an elevator with some other 
girls.  She forces a smile at Jeffrey as she comes toward him.

      JEFFREY
   Can't you come to the damn airport?

       LOUISE
   Jeffrey. I can't. I really can't. I
   have to go to that class tonight. I can't
   get out of it. I really can't. I love
   you, Jeffrey. I'll miss you.

      JEFFREY
   Alright. I'll call you in a couple of days,
   you know. I'll let you know how things are.

       LOUISE
   Okay. I'll be here. You better git-going. I
   gotta go too sweetie. I hope your father's 
   okay. I love you. I'm sorry, Jeffrey.

      JEFFREY
   I love you too, Louise. Damn it. I'll see you.

They kiss.

         CUT TO:

24. EXT. LANDING STRIP

A PLANE TAKES OFF

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